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The chart below shows the factors influencing people’s choice of where to live in Brindington in 2011
بارچارت زیر دلایل مردم برای انتخاب شهرBridington برای زندگی را نشان میدهد. متن اما بصورت بخشهایی است ک با ترتیب نادرست کنار هم قرار گرفته اند، با مطالعه چارت ترتیب قرار گرفتن بخشهای متن را مرتب سازید.
Restaurants and parks were the two factors which concerned both genders the least with just fractionally more men than women citing the latter as important (approximately 45% as against 43%). Regarding the former, only about 5% of each gender considered them an important factor
By comparison, however, more women than men stated that crime levels and shops were more important factors-approximately 75% and 55% and 45% and 35% respectively
While men seem more concerned about issues such as property prices and transport, women focused more on crime and shops. It is clear that the primary concern for both genders is the quality of the schools
As regards school quality, it was cited by approximately 85% of both males and females as the main factor
By contrast, whereas transport and property prices were quoted by nearly 80% and around 75% of men respectively, for women these factors were of less importance at about 65% and 60% respectively