Afarinesh Strategies – Part 107 – Writing Task 2 – Part 27

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۲۷ – Writing Task 2

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Read the task and response below. Correct any grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors that you find in the response. The first correction is done for you

These days, more and more people eat prepared meals from restaurants and grocery stores instead of cooking for themselves. What do you think are the reasons for this trend
?To what extent do you think this is a positive trend

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

 

: Response

People these days often buy meals instead of prepare them at home. I think this is an unfortunate trend. Modern people are often too busy to cook their own meals, but buying prepared meals is a more expensive way to eat and it doesn’t encourage families to spend time together
Modern families are very busy. The parents work hard at their jobs. The chilren are in school all day and often participate in sports or other activitys when the school day is over. Most people don’t have the time and energy to cook. When they get home from work and school, they just want relax. That’s why they buy prepared meals
Buying prepared meals is not an economical way to eat. Prepared meals are expensive. This is because the cost includes the work of the cook as well as the price of the ingredients. Food who you cook at home is cheaper. It costs less to buy the food at the grocery store and cook it yourself. It’s true that this takes time. On the other hand. it also takes time to earn money to pay for prepared meals
When families buy prepared meals, they spend less time together. This may sound funny. but it’s true. Mealtime is often the only time families are together. Its an important time. Chilren, who eat most of their meals with their parents feel happier and more secure. Their healthier emotionally. But when families don’t cook together, they usually don’t eat together either
Eat prepared meals is popular for busy people these days, but J don’t think it’s a good idea. If more families cooked at home they would have saved money and they would enjoy a better family life

 

: CORRECTIONS

Paragraph 1
N1. change prepare to preparing

Paragraph 2
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Paragraph 3
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Paragraph 4
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Paragraph 5
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: Answer

 

.N2. Change chilren to children
.N3. Change activitys to activities
.N4. Change want relax to want to relax
.N5. Change food who you cook to food that you cook
.N6. Change Its an important time to It’s an important time
.N7. Change chilren to children
.N8. Omit the comma after children
.N9. Change Their healthier to They’re healthier
.N10. Change Eatto Eating
.N11. Add a comma after If more families cooked at home
.N12. Change would have saved to would save

 

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