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22 – Writing Task 2

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Read the following tasks and responses. Use the checklist above to determine if the writer completed the task. Write comments where your answer is “NO:’ The first exercise is done for you

In some places, workers are required to retire at a specific age. In other places, workers can retire when they choose. In your opinion, should there be a mandatory retirement age for all workers

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

: Response

In some places, workers are required to retire at a specific age. I think this is a good idea. Older people need to make room for younger people in the workplace, they slow down as they age, and companies can’t always afford to pay their salaries. Older people need to make room for younger people in the workplace. If they stay at their jobs, there will be fewer openings for younger people. Younger people have children to support, whereas older people usually don’t. And, younger people need the opportunity to move up in their careers. Older people had that chance and now they need to make room for their younger colleagues. Older people slow down as they age; this is a natural process. It is more difficult for them to work extra hours when this is required. Additionally, they may accomplish less during a normal work day than they did when they were younger. Also, older people tend to have more health problems, and this affects their work
Retirement at age 65 is required in many workplaces, and I agree with this policy. It leaves more opportunity for younger workers and ensures that older people leave the workplace when it is time for them to slow down and rest